My visual poem is about friendship. It was also about how we spend time together and how our bond is strong. How we get along with each other and how we can act like our self with each other. I have a group of friends who are crazy, weird, loud, and who laughs a lot. I think the visuals make my poem alive. It shows what my poem is all about. Even though I couldn't get some clips that will match the words in my poem I still think that it turned out pretty good. The visuals made an impact to my poem because it showed what I was trying to say.
I think the special effects I added made my poem more friendly. I had a couple of transitions in the beginning and in the end. I added the ken burns affect to a lot of my photos and I think I made them look like it wasn't just a photo but more like a video without movements. The affects made the mood more friendly. I didn't add that much effects because I only started putting effects at last minute.
I am satisfied with my poem because I like the way it turned out. When I finished my poem and watched it, I was really happy with how it turned out. My poem turned out better than I thought it would. I could make my poem better by adding more B-roll and adding more transitions and effects. I could also say my poem again because there were some sounds in the background. I am really satisfied with how my poem turned out in the end.
•The Writing was great
ReplyDelete•Some of the b-roll was kinda shaky
•I like the topic
Good rhymes, Good rhymes always help the flow of the poem.
ReplyDeleteNo complaints here.
The last part was so nice :D
Great shots of your friends telling secrets.
ReplyDeleteMuffled voice.
Great video of you spending time with your friends.
Great writing
ReplyDeleteyou were talking fast and so was the b-roll
great topic
I love how your poem rhymes.
ReplyDeleteWatch your grammar.
I love how you end on a powerful statement.
I like the b-roll of your friends
ReplyDeletethe voice overs are really fast
beautiful captions.
Love how you used rhyming words
ReplyDeleteHad some unstable shots
Liked how you took pictures of your friends
I like the B-roll of your friends at school
ReplyDeleteIt went by really fast, don't rush through your A-Roll
In the end I like how it fades
I love your pictures
ReplyDeleteyou can slow down when your reading
And it was really well written
1. I like your b-rolls (especially because I was there)
ReplyDelete2. Camera movement in one shot
3. Your Visual Poem pictures are funny, your friends are crazy (including me)
I liked the message you've expressed in the visual poem
ReplyDeleteI could hear the breaths you take
Very good caption at the end I feel like that can be a quote
I like all of your transitions
ReplyDeleteyou said it really fast
I also liked the way you ended your poem
I loved how you ended it!
ReplyDeleteOne thing is that you were talking fast.
I also liked the message!
Very meaningful language. SO TRUE!
ReplyDeleteThat was a little fast for my tastes.
I really liked the shots when you were playing with your friends.
The message you sent in the poem was really good
ReplyDeleteYou were talking really fast to the point where I didn't get what you said
nice job on the captions
Nice b-roll of friends
ReplyDeleteIt was a little fast
Nice rymes
Great shot variety!
ReplyDeleteThe poem was to fast.
I liked how you expressed your feeling through your poem.
I liked your pictures of you and your friends
ReplyDeleteBut you need a little bit more video
I liked you talked about a topic that most people know about
I like the pictures that you use.
ReplyDeleteYou rushed saying your poem.
I like your clips showing the emotion of your friends.
I really like how you got shots of many different friends not just one
ReplyDeleteI think that you could talk a little slower
I really like the different angles of your shots not just straight on
I liked you B-roll it was amazing the shots were very creative
ReplyDeleteI think you should've slowed down your reading i couldn't understand some parts because you were reading to fast
I liked your topic
I liked all the different b-roll that you had and in the pictures the emotion you guys showed you could really feel it.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that you could've done better was maybe speak the visual poem slower.
I like how you got b-roll at school, and at home, up in a tree... good job!
I like the story
ReplyDeleteI saw repeating B-roll
nice rimes
I liked your b-roll
ReplyDeleteYou talked kind of fast
Great poem
cool B-roll
ReplyDeleteyou talk to fast
kind off bad voice overs